stalking one
can never be
its an obsession
that some cant read
theres danger now
its in the air
the dangers real
its every where
a stalkers mind
is sick and twisted
an instutition can never fix it
its an unknown cause
to the medical field
beware
beware is how i feel
Please tell me what you think
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I am going to give you three laughing bunnies because this poem is that good, even though you have one typo, ''instutition''. Correct spelling is ''institution'' Your flow in this poem is amazing, such a great write about a stalker too.
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Great subject!
You gave me shivers down my spine! To be constantly alert to the dangerous mind of a potential stalker. I'm a friendly stalker, hehehe. Yes, and some dont notice the tainted actions of a stalker, "Oh he's just being friendly..." Your subject is full of real-life. Great work, buddy!
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Well Done!
When one person of that character gets fixed on someone, it is thier obsession to own it..Well written in truth.
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hmmm, yes, beware indeed!
and what a valuable point you make that an institution will never fix a troubled mind . . . there is but one answer for such a predicament.
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ah there are many amd peeps in this world, living in dream ways, they have no idea what life really is
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i can relate to this. Great write, great message, and honesty.
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Wow!!! Sad but true!!!
Well written warning with a great sense of danger & trepidation...
Obcession is a dangerous pastime & even more disturbing is how oblivious they are to their delusions...
A great write ...
Well done!!!
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Awesome
A profound piece with a truthful message! Best of luck in the contest! -
The mind of a stalker runs very deep, they are such a scary person. Yes we all need to beware of them. What an amazing write. Pulled the reader right in. Good luck in the contest my friend.
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nice
sick and demented i say
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You would have to have a twisted mind to hurt someone like that...the fear that would walk with them...wow! you have really pulled this off...good read my sweet friend
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This is very interesting Good luck with it Dear in Mystic's contest. Hope you do well with it.
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Excellent
Excellent portrayal of the subject matter in verse--Well done----Good luck in the contest!
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thank you my friend
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well
i guess to be a stalker can entail many things. Certainly it must be an obsession and the mind may just be out of touch with reality. Oh yes beware
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hi bob
thank you for stopping by to read
i appreciate your comments always
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