Did I?
for one moment in time
actually believe
I held a chance
in the hell I call your eyes?
For one moment
did I actually think
that you were different
than those other guys
with one track minds?
Maybe, my love,
you’re not different
you follow the line
walking straight along
with all the other guys
-you weren’t
worth my
breath-
Author notes
this is personal... wat do u think?
Please tell me what you think
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Life is meant to be a happy and enrich environment which love and happiness create a smile and make the heart feel full.Sometimes that is just enough because it love when it is from the heart that has fallen in love with your mind. we all learn by mistake and thats the best things. well done.
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wow
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wow its really good, your one of mi favorite poets. keep up the good work
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Deep Write
well Sweets imma predict that this poem was about a break up and the fact you were hurt again? ... or it is a guy you really liked but he turned out to be like the other boys? either way Sweets life hits ya fast in the face and well sweets you just got to pick yourself up and move on with liufe. some boys face it sadly are just in it for getitng laid where as others trulyw ant to have a relationship but just don't know how to sustain one ect. any ways ultimately its up to you in rhe end what happens. this was a sad poem because you show us beautifully how some boys don't act their age but merely act childish and immerchure just to satisfiy their lustful ways. any ways deep write sweets and I hope you'll find the right one some day that you deserve. remember you always have my friendship and my love always
Daddy
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