All cracked up
but nobody cares
alone, depressed
beyond repair
peer into my soul
through shining black eyes
listen as i scream
my silent cries....
Author notes
picture prompt
In a list
A contest entry
- Pictures Inspired; Think Dark by Rose Dark Thorn.
900 points, ended February 27, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
COMMENTS WELCOME
Comments
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great write. great read. "silent cries" that term to me means a lot. the description fits into so many experiences of mine. yr the bestest!
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ooo... Very powerful, your rhyme was amazing... It is just wonderful... Everything contributes to the rhythm of the poem... which just makes it amazingly more powerful...
~amazing job!!
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This is simple. It doesn't say a lot, but a flow and form is there. Even though it is short and blunt, it still speaks volumes, though I was hoping for a more inner look of her thoughts. I still like what you have here and the meanings behind the words.
Thank you for entering. -
This is well written, and so very sad. I think you did a great job. Your words connect very nicely with the picture. Good luck in the contest.]
Kelli
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