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Alone

Alone
          again
    on
        a

rainy
      night,

the only person
     
    on
my        mind

is y
    o
    u.

Why did you have to leave me?

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Feb.26/2008
     

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Wrote along with a picture.

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  • ckwriter69
    March 2, 2008

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    Nice write, I like the format of scattered lines. It has a flow to it. Thanks for sharing and keep the pen flowing as always.


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    February 26, 2008

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    This is a very interesting format
    you have here. Almost like someone
    wobbling and finally falling apart
    at the very end. Very sad but,
    well thought out work here!




    Jeremy0826


  • Willowhaunt
    February 26, 2008
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    Very nice, much the same take on the prompt that I had. Well done. ^^


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    February 26, 2008
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    O.o

    My eyes are smarting right now... Sorry hun, but my LD prevents me from being able to read your poem, because the funny typing made me feel dyslexic, since I couldn't visually process it... Anyway, I'm sure it was good! Best of luck!

    Laura xxx