the raucous repercussions
of spilling skies; stains
on cracked concrete;
the overflowing openings
of stopped sewers.
the rheumatic rhythms
[of rain.]
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Quickie by Willowhaunt.
300 points, ended February 26, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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your work is penned with such skill and precision.....im jealous! great write...the rain is such a beautiful thing and you described it perfectly.
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this is amazing and I can see why it won the gold. your words are so strong and breath taking well done hunni
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Very good poem my friend
see you soon
zarok
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Oh wow... Your words... always amaze me.
wonderfully done,
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I like yours better.
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This piece sounds a bit like rain itself...very well done! Great take on the prompt, and beautifully worded given the word limit. Excellent write.
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Wow... Your uses of alliteration and assonance never cease to amaze me! Well done, and good luck!
Laura xxx
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