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Seaweed

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She rises from the murky deep of her enchanted kelp bed

when vessels slice through stormy waters,

their trepidation torn spirits clinging to wind ravage rigging,

nerves frayed from the constant watery assaults.

 

Salty tasting prayers plead for mercy to survive the deluge

blood shot, stingy eyes desperately search for any miracle.

 

Her emerald specter form appears in calming assurance

waving a soothing arm in their direction

until their ships are snarl in talons of seaweed and sucked below

as sprite mother to all marine plants, she makes sure her children are always fed.

Author notes

picture:"guardian" by aaran marbell

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  • PageTurner
    March 25, 2008

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    I Loved the calm before the storm
    the ending really got me! A grusome
    tale, tantalizingly told...



    "she makes sure her children are always fed."


    I Love It, my Friend!

    ~ Nicky*hearts;




  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 3, 2008
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    Thankies loved this one good luck


  • ScarletO gold member
    February 27, 2008

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    Wow, a mother will do anything to get those chillins fed won't she? Very creative and fantastic use of vocabulary. Love the image used as well.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    February 27, 2008

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    Congratulations on winning the Gold TrophY Uncle this poem is awesome Can feel the waves lol. RedwingSpirit


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 27, 2008

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    Oh wow this turned out to be quite a dral piece right at the end! Wonderful take on the pic and opne I hadn't thought of!
    Thanks so muich for your entry
    Gaylene


  • Roaddog Wolf
    February 27, 2008

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    great take on the

    picture prompt , I like where you went with this and it flows and is written with your usual talented pen.

    I wrote one for this contest too and find the directions of inspiration, very different and interesting to note and useful to improving my poetry. Good write enjoyed the read

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