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Drifting.

I've tried to stop the ship
or at least to slow the speed
I dropped anchor, and without a slip
it held me for a while indeed.

My anchor was almost completely freed
It didn't hold untill the end
floating away at a frequent speed
I was supported by one true friend

I planted my roots in the ground
as I strechted out to the sky
I was in the earth, safe and sound
on my friends I did rely.

but the ground around me spat me out
and threw my petals to the winds
letting the air carry me about
Why did I ever call you friends?

So I'm drifting away on the open seas.
My roots are gone, and my anchor is shorn.
And truthfully I'm as happy as I can be.
and as I float away, none of my "friends" will mourn.

I suppose you can say that I lost touch,
or you can push the blame all on to me.
but when all you friends were my crutch,
I was thrust away like a nobody.

Please tell me what you think

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  • SereneFelicity
    February 27, 2008
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    hahaha I KNOW
    I was in a depressed mood when I wrote this, I don't really see it like this, I'm just exagerating haha.
    Plus I didn't want to make it sound happy...
    haha.


  • BeautifulCalamity08
    February 27, 2008

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    Awwww...I really hope you don't feel like this...well at least not about everyone...I can really see where it applies to some but you still definitely have Jessica and me(even if we don't talk all that often...I'm still here)

    ok the poem...it's really emotional and well really sort of depressing because I know everyone can relate to this...but then there is still hope because there are still people that really do care...

    - 0 - 0 - 0 - 0 - 0 - 0 - 0 - 0 - 0 - 0 - 0 - 0 - 0 - 0

    ooo by the way next weekend the 8th and 9th the twins and I are coming down to Raleigh again maybe we can meet at the mall when we go?

    by the way...I really miss you!