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Cold Cocked

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faster draw
inoculation
Shot clean flu me










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  • Tam
    March 17, 2008

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    LOL

    you missed your calling! you should have been a stand up comedian!
    LOL
    well done! congrats on the bronze cup...
    Blessings! Tammy


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    February 28, 2008
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    I just want to know where that mind of yours goes? Excellent! ~Pamela


    • paulcreates silver member
      February 28, 2008

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      actually, I haven't even gotten this virus...yet.
      Thank you for your wonderful comments.

      Paul


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 27, 2008

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    DId so enjoy reading this haiku and the wonderful last line - great play on words. FIts right into this contest.


    • paulcreates silver member
      February 27, 2008
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      Thank you gran. These haikus are so enjoyable to write.

      Paul


  • Dalaney gold member
    February 26, 2008
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    choke...snort...laugh....ha
    you are my funny man love, lane


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    February 26, 2008
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    lol great haiku good luck


  • Pollycheck
    February 26, 2008

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    faster draw
    inoculation
    Shot clean flu me

    Thank you for entering my contest. I love the play on words in the last line. Great Job.

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