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To an old friend

You slip from me
Falling away
We use to be best friends
But lately,
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You say…I hate it
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L
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The same thing.
From what you say,
To how you say it.
But I don’t want to,
I just left you.
New friends,
As a possibility
A new best friend
I am
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  • Xx Emo Teddy xX
    March 12, 2008

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    this is a beautifully writen poem...
    ive never seen a poem writen like that ..i think i might steal it