feather light strokes from your
artist's hand as you etch
your need onto my skin
soft and tender
wisps of exotic scents fill
my senses; sandalwood and
cinnamon surround me
like an alluring enticement
sighs whisper through me, seeping
into my consciousness, seduction
leading to a beautiful surrender
to love completely
with every breath we take, each beat
of our hearts drawing us closer
until we are one
forever
Author notes
Artwork:- ~paulrichardjames @ www.deviantart.com
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A contest entry
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Merry Meet colour m with love
ive also trying to figure it all out to
hope to chat soon to
blessed be
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Such beautiful passion flowing from your pen...wow! smooth as silk and soft as a babies sigh...niaish so much for sharing with me and for entering
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Thank you so very much for your lovely comment, Anne.
Margaret
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sounds fimilliar... I'm on quick comment, but I'm sure I have read this. lovely poetry and I really like this.
doesn't fit the promt, yet it is so beautifull! -
Beautiful
A lovely piece that flowed as fluidly as the paints themselves. Very nice piece of work!
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soft and sensual poetry here, nicely done, the pace is smooth and inviting with the imagery, love is the life, a good poem.
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I really loved this.
"seduction
leading to a beautiful surrender"- definatly my favorite wording
*sammee -
Beautiful
A beautifully penned write. It speaks of love and desire.
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awww very cool:
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greetings:)
im new here and still dont know how to do all these things
thanks so much/.
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Poem is excellent! I read because of title, and glad I did.
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good stuff i enjoyed the read
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wow
this is very good. i love it. keep up the good work.
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very nice
very nice poem on love and sweet surrender . . liked "like an alluring enticement" and "leading to a beautiful surrender" . . well done
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"to love completely
with every breath we take, each beat
of our hearts drawing us closer
until we are one
forever"
Ok, I'm gonna sigh as well, but I'm remembering to breathe though. LOL! Lovely poem dear, truly touching.
Love and peace,
mj.
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No wonder our daughter is always sighing, she gets it from you
I know how sick you are, my dear, and I appreciate that you wrote such a beautiful comment for me. It made me smile.
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Exquisite
A sensual and beautiful piece you have penned here.
Your imagery is vivid and delicately penned
Thanks for sharing,
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wow auntie this is such a sensual and seductive piece. your words structured and penned beautifully with a flow and your words made me sigh.
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Such a sensual, seductive and most beautiful piece you have penned.
Love it!
Gaylene
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Beautiful
Beautifully versed and structured with excellent flow--well done!
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You did it again Mum
Just made me go sighhhhhhhhhhh
made me stop breathing at how WoW and sensual these words are..
Breathe Cindy breathe lol
That first stanza is my fav....couldn't have said it better myself lol
Cin
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Now what have Dad and I told you about breathing? It's one of those things you just have to remember to do sweetheart
I'm happy that you like it. Needing and loving go hand in hand, I think.
Love you
Mum 
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hehehe
Aw my Dad..Love having an AP dad..
yes your right needing & loving do go hand in hand, well they do in my opinion heheheheh
*love U Too
Cin
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