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I can't help

Sitting at the edge
Can only kick my feet
You are so far away
Yet you make me complete.
I can’t help but fall,
And I am falling hard.
I can’t do it, please not again
My feelings I have to discard.

I am sorry
I don’t know what to feel
I can’t help you
I have to heal.
But I need you now
I need you here
Being alone is what I fear

How you helped me,
Helped me up.
Not to let me down.
I have had enough
I hate these feelings
I know you do too,
But I can’t help it
When I fall for you

Please tell me what you think

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  • Xx Emo Teddy xX
    March 12, 2008

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    your an amazing poet love..continue with it ...not that you plan not to O.o

    i especially like the last verse


    • VanityAngst
      March 23, 2008
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      thank you
      its for this one guy
      what was his name...
      um...
      idk
      but he was amazing
      and sweet and these were my feelings when i first fell for him. i remember his name now...jordan!
      that was it!