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Leaves Wet

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Leaves wet lie in the muck

could be a long lost soul

Just inches away from fresh water

that could wash away the mold

 

So many souls are lost in life

for being just a short prayer away

From the chance of sheer salvation

that could cleanse them free today

 

Let this picture be a reminder

don't let your soul get stuck in the muck

When you cry out from a distance

for faith to help you get unstuck

 

With enough faith and prayer

down comes a flushing cleansing rain

And moves your soul the short distance

into the fresh water and your soul is free again

 

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Photo by © jennifer aka Pantress
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  • pantress silver member
    March 12, 2008
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    "So many souls are lost in life
    for being just a short prayer away
    From the chance of sheer salvation
    that could cleanse them free today"


    This is so true, And many know not how to get back themselves, for they have been lost for so long..

    Thanks for your entry and best of luck in my contest. Jennifer


  • pantress silver member
    February 26, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry, please credit photographer, as stated, in author notes. Good luck in the contest.

    • amysticwriter silver member
      February 26, 2008
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      Pantress...photographer has been credited in author notes, as required...fasinating picture...mystery