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why

why did you
how could you
and with them?

i trusted you
the most important thing in my life
...trust...
and you had it
in your hands, a little glowing ball

then you did it
you held her hand and said you loved her
the day before you were here
and we, in sweet silence

the trust
slipped away
melting, molten lava
back into the earth

then you did it
you held her hand in your lap
three days before you were here
and we, in sweet silence

why
i need a reason
something
because see, trust is a funny thing
once you lose it
you never get it again

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  • BlackSwan
    February 26, 2008

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    losing trust in someone can be absolutely devestating i vouch for that.

    i like how you organized this poem, i really feel the emotion pour out in your words.