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[ the yellow moon ]

yellow moon
spins to a stop
walking the dog

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Remember this yo yo move?

I had a yellow yo yo............

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  • Topaze gold member
    March 4, 2008
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    Nice

    Very well done, and best of luck in the comp.


  • BellaD
    March 2, 2008

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    Cute poem. I remember the Duncan YoYo contests. I was never very good with a yo-yo, so I couldn't "walk the dog" but I recognized that move right away when I read your poem.

  • ea silver member
    March 2, 2008
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    haha. cute. yes, I do remember this.


  • Pollycheck
    February 26, 2008

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    yellow moon
    spins to a stop
    walking the dog

    Thank you for entering my contest. Of course I remember that move. I was a Duncan yoyo champ when I was a kid.


  • Kelli Marie
    February 26, 2008

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    I love this. It is great. I like the image it paints. I hope it does well in the contest. Good job.
    Kelli

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