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Frown


No strength
Such a sad clown
Wearing a frown




A contest entry

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 27, 2008
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    OOOPS

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    February 27, 2008
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    the wearing down of flu does indeed leave frowns good one good luck,...


  • Pollycheck
    February 26, 2008

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    No strength
    Such a sad clown
    Wearing a frown

    Thank you for entering my contest. I really like the contrast that you have included in this haiku.


  • Kelli Marie
    February 26, 2008

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    This is a great haiku. I think you did a great job. I can see that sad clown now. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli