Exalted creature of exotic beauty
how magnificent you are.
As your fluttering wings
hum and sing like crystal
twinkling stars.
You levitate in harmony
unaware of your glorious charm.
So lady like and lovely with a
style thats graceful and warm.
Your scent is fragrant and provocative
as the ambrosial flowers you desire.
I'm captivated by your glamorous
colors that radiate like a wildfire.
You honor this ethereal garden
with your gracious queenly presence.
So make yourself at home in this
paradise of floral quintessence.
Author notes
Click on link below to see
a photo of a Hummingbird Moth.
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2393203
A contest entry
- What's That Bug? #58 by Lyndon.
1750 points, ended March 30, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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OH my, this is lovely. Such a beautiful little creature to grace a garden. Queenly presence lady-like, are close to personification. I would have liked to see a bit more human character in this poem though. Feel free to tweak. I will be back before the contest close. Thank you for your entry. ~Pamela
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Personification is vague through the mention of "lady" and "queen". You may do morre work on this poem, if you wish.
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This was a very elegant piece! The imagery in this piece is absolutely amazing! Thank you for sharing this piece!
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good luck in the contest graceful/gracious one too many OTHERWISE a very strong write full of good images rganks for sharing regards zaj
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