the dream I had two
nights in a row, tho
I know I cannot do
it.
I want to be
an azure sea,
rolling in
& out & in
again,
caressing your skin.
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful....was not expecting that very sensual, beautiful ending...so lovely & I love the subtle play with rhyme & the little back and forth beat it has, like waves
really nice..
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ardentMarch,
I appreciate your comment on many levels. I am glad you found the unexpected in my words as you read this.
Thanks...
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oh yea... mmmm
that's seductive :-)
what i love about you is that you have this ability to seduce the reader in a way you wouldn't expect and before you know it, whammo, you're seduced and asking yourself, how'd he do that !
once again, i enjoyed
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I suppose, being the way I am in real life & being a poet, as well, might have something to do with it. You know, however, you have that same ability...
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Great
Long time without come online here and today im just reading my favourites like you. Loved your poem. I'm writting just in portuguese right now. Really loved. Thanks for sharing. -
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Maria,
Good to hear from you again. Writing poetry in any language is great. I'll check to see if you have posted any in Portuguese on your site.
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A lovely poem as always Rudy
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Oh, a very sultry write. I like the imagery here and the picture you paint with your words. Very intriguing.
Kelli -
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Thank you for reading & finding my words intriguing...
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