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Something He Doesn't Know

One thing the love of my life needs to know,
Is that I love him.
I love him with all my heart and soul
And he doesn't know.

At least,
I don't think he knows.
He knew a year ago,
But now I don't know.

Most people don't know
That I love him as much as I do
And it hurts me
Because I'm the only one who knows.

I love this guy with all my heart,
And nothing will ever change that.
He is my world,
My everything...

Author notes

Daniel is someone that I've loved for such a long time. We can't be together until we're 16 - and that's too long for me to wait...

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  • HereComesTheSun
    April 30, 2008
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    i like the poem becuaes of its repititon and i LOVE that :] good job