You can look at me and see what you want,
You can talk about me until your time is spent,
I stand under a shadow of pain and haze,
Sometimes I'm so depressed I lose track of the days,
People talk shit, and think it's a good laugh,
I bottle up the anger and wait for the nuke blast,
I'm going insane, can't wait to help myself,
I'm falling down and I can't get help,
In the 2 story house in which I reside,
You won't look twice and see what goes on inside,
This problem is my own, and I made it my hell,
I keep it bottled up 'cause there's nothing to tell,
No blunts or joints for me,
No speedballing, meth doing, or coke snorting,
No crying, screaming, or even razor blades,
I'm not that bad but I get worse by the day,
The problem I got is that I hide within myself,
And I'm afraid to talk to anyone else,
'Cause I wonder if they'll throw it back at me,
Like my enimies did to try and burn me 3rd degree,
Nothing tarnished, but this is a recipe,
Follow the steps and you'll get what you see (thats me),
People don't care they won't even stop and stare
At the one they talk to,
The one so strange he could probably walk through them,
Without even blinking an eye,
They could probably abandon me and I would still be the same guy,
Now I'm done with this cute little rhyme,
I sure am glad you took the time to
Read this through and let it ring true,
My fingers are sore now,
So you know how it goes now,
Peace out.
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God Im speachless, and if you can make a person like me speachless then your magical. I love your work. And I can totally relate to this. Like I said, ur the shit.
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It was good. I like how you make it ryhme. I think I'm the kind of person who finds ryhming facinating, for some reason. It sounds like I'm a geek x) hahah. well, it was good =)
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nah you dont sound like a geek. but gawd I'm flattered you took the time to dig up this relic...lol.
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I never understand why people don't write author's notes. And for some reason it bothers me. Oh well. Nice write.
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This was really good!!
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Wow, thats really good, love! I love it!
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great write doll
hope you are doing well
lots of love
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