Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

You look, I see.

You look and see ruin.
I look and see wonder.

You see a tree.
I see a forest.

You see a dog.
I see a friend.

You see a rock.
I see someone to throw it at.

You look and see a feather.
I see a story.

You see grass.
I see a field.

You look and see water.
I look and see life swiming in it.

You see a brick.
I see the house.



You look and see a could.


I see the world.

Author notes

I was thinking about why people don't see things for more. They always want to rebild something that's perfect the way it is.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • HaleyMary
    February 27, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Beautiful write, Ray. This write holds so much truth to it. There is always more than meets the eye. All people need to use is their imaginations. And, also sometimes there are things in life that are fine the way they are and don't always need to be changed. Thanks for sharing. Keep that pen flowing.