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my forbidden love

a dangerous love
a forbidden match
a shameful kiss
No one was able to know
She loved him with her whole heart
It was a love unknown to the world
She couldn't help but surrender her heart
He was her knight in shining armor
Nothing he said was ever enough for her
He loved her, she knew it with one look
Their love could never be more than a dirty secret
She was all ready taken, but he didn't care
She would always wonder what could have been
But for now he was her forbidden love

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  • mandikins
    February 27, 2008

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    Aww how sad. it reminds me of Romeo and Juliet a bit. I loved the way you expressed the love between the characters, it was amazing! Kudos.