False thoughts forever here.
dreams, hope, happiness.
Walking aimlessly in my head.
Am I crazy?
Is it make believe?
The pain thrusts thoroughly.
Having being blind seems peaceful, safe.
I stop and I open my eyes to the abyss.
The hell I have been hiding from.
All the pain and suffering.
My time has come,
sight may be seen.
A bright reality I'm drawn to.
The final embrace,
the final breath,
all I did was see.
Author notes
pIC 2
A contest entry
- Photo Inspired by Firequeen.
300 points, ended March 12, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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this is brilliant.
short and yet says so much.
Thank you for your wonderful entry.
Congrats to you.
Hugzz fire
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"I see truth was a false truth and my thoughts are now gone I know of no where else to go." I liked this one good write.
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enjoyable read
well done with this one my friend
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Great job big sis absolutely awesome!
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