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Finally

I finally get the rose from your heart,
Standing over your grave feeling apart.
My tears, I hide them with the rain,
So no one can see the pain.

My thoughts are only of your love
It’s God’s turn to judge from above.
Your were here for a short time,
You left  your true love behind.

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  • Firequeen
    March 13, 2008

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    Sad yet so beautifuly writen.
    You did a wonderful job with this
    Thank you for your wonderful entry.
    Fire