Everything we do leaves an imprint on this world,
a wispy image of who we were.
Be careful, the real you is seen
in the reflection you leave behind,
a piece of your soul to be veiwed by all.
Author notes
picture by Coelogyne
A contest entry
- A Grand Farewell to All Poetry by Great Cthulhu.
1735 points, ended December 27, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wonderful!
A true reflection of the echoes we leave behind in our footprints, well done! Thanks for playing along! -
I Like It
So true - this poem flows beautifully - I am a rhymer but enjoyed the message to this poem - I came here to return the favor and am glad I did - keep on keeping on - God Bless - Joe - (Dobar Dan)
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wonderful write...lots of wisdom sewn into the fabric of this piece. A thoroughly enjoyable read. Well done.
Rory -
Interesting poem. I think it fits the image well.
Nicely written.
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Hmmm... Very interesting... I like your light airy words, yet they have depth and meaning... Wonderful job
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