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Beauty Unleashed

Minuet particles of life's dust
dissipating into the wind,
initiating circular patterns of splendor.
Tremendous forces of nature
causing dangerous beauty to be unleashed.

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Prompt is : Dust in the wind
Photo : Fotosearch

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  • chilali
    October 6, 2008

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    Short and lovely! Such a beautiful picture as well. Great flow throughout the poem. Congratulations on winning Gold!


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 27, 2008

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    Lovely picture of beautiful sunset; liked the words used in your poem to describe the wind and the dust blown around by it. Congratulations on winning gold in this contest.


  • Floorboards
    February 27, 2008
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    Excellent piece, congratulations on yer golden goose,
    well deserved,
    Floorboards.


  • going nowhere
    February 26, 2008

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    the intensity of this piece hit hard... my life as dust waiting for some force to allow me to release all i am meant to be... wow... whoever is around me at that time needs to just step aside. wonderful entry. thank you.


  • Nevel
    February 26, 2008

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    "dangerous beauty" very original I must say, never heard of it.....there is a lot of beautiful imagery into your poem, short and well choosen words.....I like the content of your poem. Good luck in the contest

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