I just love the feel
Of the blade on my skin
Letting out emotions
And Bringing new ones in
Its not often
Only when im down
Will you be there
When i hit the ground?
Did you say that?
I can't help what i do
Cause i feel hole when I'm with you
I never want to leave
I never want to go
But you make my day
just by saying hello
My life's looking up now
I think its mown
Maybe i can finally
Put the blade down
A contest entry
- Diamond Eye's by Dark Prince Chaos.
660 points, ended May 5, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Lemme know what u think
Comments
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truly a beautifull peace i loved the wright you did a great job i know that feling thnx for joining my contest beast of luck -Bow's) (*)
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np and thx
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lol this is reli gd lolx keep it up loll x x x
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will do u 2 =) ty
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I really like it, it's a reflection of my life, and so many others. Good work, and please keep writing.
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i dont think i will stop its good to get it out. Its true so many of us feel this way
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i really like
it totally reminds me of my life. good write. im emo as well.
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=] ty.
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really cool ya im an emo to so ya hi
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hi =]
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hi ya ummm so ya i really like the way you write
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ghee thanks
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Awww Thats Well Gd ;]
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TY ;P
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Aww very hopefull. I loved this poem, at first it was very dark and it came out at the end with a sensitive meaning. Very nice job. Keep up the great writting!
~Kate~
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Thanks
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