Love is a big illusion,
Maybe life’s best confusion.
No single being can ever truly define “love”
For another being, it seems to be different,
Opinions changed and hearts lost
Love is different to all who feel it,
So confusing this illusion can be.
Love is a big illusion
Haven’t all of us felt life’s most valuable confusion?
We define it as our own,
And we make it into something more glorious
Than anything ever thought imaginable
Melting amidst the confusion – taking hold of our fears
Letting go of all doubts, and feeling what love is.
Love is a big illusion
One that I believe sends us sprawling
Into our most precious form
Of confusion.
Author notes
Based on the quote;
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Love is a big illusion
and life is a smart confusion
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A contest entry
- Love is a big illusion and Life is a smart confusion by Purush.
550 points, ended February 27, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Life Or Something Like It by shuvi.
300 points, ended March 20, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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If a human being were a cup, then love would be the water that uniquely conforms to its shape. You used the quoye brilliantly and turned it into a poem with substance. Great Write.
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Thank you very much
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Yeah, true words.. though confusion delusion rhyme..i am not very sure, could've been better
anyway, nicely written
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Thanks
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While I man not agree with what your saying it really is a good poem. I really enjoyed it. Good luck in teh contrest you have it in. keep me posted how ya do.
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All the best
OH! LOVELY
you express in your verse the needed explanation for the problems posed in context of the contest.
well written.
Best of luck in my contest
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