I lay on the floor waiting
Waiting to hear his foot steps coming down the hall.
Suddenly the light flips on in the hall way.
I run in the closet and start to gently knock on the wall. Hoping someone would have heard in the other room, but no one came.
BOOM BANG BAM
He busted in.
He was drunk you could tell. you could smell him all the way in the closet.
He throw the bottle at the wall and yelled for me tears start running down my checks I start throwing clothe over me thinking if he came in he couldnt find me then,but boy was I wrong he tore up my room looking for me everything was everywhere.
I finally thought it was over when he said forget it, but then he started walking towards the closet i could hear my heart beating faster and faster.
And i just knewn if I could hear it he could to.
He got to the closet door.
All my blood flushed right to my face.
I tryed to stay as calm as possible.
He busts the door down.
my heart completly stopped beating around the time he felt my foot and grabbed it.
I wanted to die completly be dead.
He grabs me up and tells me to be quite, as quite as possible not like anyone would hear me if they didnt hear that bottle hit the wall earlier.
I was actually pondering my chances were on yelling and them waking up they werent very good i guess cause i kept quite. You would think that since they were in the next room they would have been up by now.
He jerks me up by my hair and calls me all different kinds of names even though I was little I know what all of them meant.
He starts caressing my body. kissing me all over pulls off my shirt and starts undoing mine and his pants.
He lays me down on the bed and gently rubs my hair kissing all up and down my neck.
Suddenly there was so much pain and it has never stopped since that night.
Not even to this day!!
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Hey,
this is excellent... I am canceling the contest. Its nothing anyone did. I am just having a rough time right now.. and reading this is hard for me.. but next contest I do on this subject matter, I will be sure to notify you of, and you can re-enter.
Ssorry.
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oh em gee..hun. i know what its like to be "violated" it has happend to me more than once. reading this just brought back the memories....that is one of the reasons i do drugs..to try and forget. but it was an amazing write...keep up the good work
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I'm sorry you know what it's like to be violated in that way. There's no feeling like being forced to do something like that, especially when you don't understand it completely, you just know it's wrong. I wish I could help, but since it's already been done all I can say is that if you need someone to discuss it with I am here. I hope that you realise that it was his fault and I hope he does/did get punished for what he did to you... Men like this are sick f''kers.
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so powerful.. such emotion and feeling gave me chills but in a good way.. the only thing that i would change is the grammer but it was very strong..
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"Not even to this day"
Hun, if this is still happening... you need to tell someone; really, you do. This needs to stop, darling.
You don't deserve this and you never have.
Sweetie, please, if this is still happening you need to tell someone.
Take care, love Laura xx -
ok grammr kinda off but i loved it.. it can really relate to me since ive been in a situatetion like this but very strong and pwerful .... luv it!!!
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I would work on the grammar and spelling...
powerful emotion though.
It's good...I think that it captures the fear that women feel when they are in a situation like this...
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thank you
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grammer,"throw should be threw" and"close should be clothes","beatting should be beating","don should be down"
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i was in a rush had to get it done cause the bell was about to ring
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... filthy. No more words.
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