Here one moment,
Happy as can be.
in this world living so free
you shared your smile with all you could..
if i could bring you back..god knows i would
in this world you are gone
but in our hearts you live on
in these few words i tell how i feel,
through sad tears this doesnt seem real.
were trying to go on but where do we start?
youll always be remembered in all of our hearts.
the memories you left are all that we can hold to
you will be remembered Brittney we will always remember you!!
A contest entry
- all the prewrites you want by serenity silvermoon.
600 points, ended March 29, 2008, 150 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - #76 For anyone that's ever lost a child. by daviscth.
550 points, ended May 29, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me cry....options =] and PW allowed :D by LeilaJayne.
900 points, ended May 17, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PRE-WRITES ONLY!!! PRE-WRITTEN POEMS WHO SHOULD'VE WON A TROPHIE by Trill - Trickle.
750 points, ended March 4, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one; your best prewrite. by August Starlight.
765 points, ended March 21, 93 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is so sad. I haven't lost anyone relatively close to me in my life and I consider myself lucky it hasn't happened yet. I am sorry for your loss.
Thanks for entering and good luck -
amazing piece of your heart you have shared... i wish you well with the contest and may your heart always feel the love
cheers
Jen
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This is a beautiful loving poem you've written. Your thoughts mirror my own.... It's so hard to try and live again after losing a child. Thank you for sharing.
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I think you did very well
with this write,
I think you actually are good at this,
writing and am glad you feel release through this,
if you are cutting yourself..please try to stop,
it really isn't worth it.
Please.
Leave me a message...whoops sound like a phone machine!
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this was very excellent. I know the place this was written in all too well. You did a fantastic job of coveying a message that was heartfelt and very true. outstanding write
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This is a moving write for someone greatly missed. I am sorry for your loss.
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This is a heart warming write. One that touches the soul. I think you did a great job. A most wonderful write.
Kelli
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