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Sleeping Beauty

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poetry is a dagger

 

to your lips, may they find comfort

& spill sporadically onto the flesh

colored paper you've collected

 

mark the folds and tears,

not those pretty eyes that cry

may the ink marks color you

like the speckles on house finch eggs

 

but don't break;

or else the words won't suffice

desires of masquerade lies

and temptations

 

 

of a poetess and her pen

Author notes

Picture (c) Dagwanoenyent @ deviantART
(http://dagwanoenyent.deviantart.com/)

[for my dearest friend: luna-midnight @ Allpoetry.com]
(http://allpoetry.com/luna-midnight)

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  • Firequeen
    March 13, 2008

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    beautiful
    I know your freind will love this
    as i know i did.
    such a beautiful write.
    Thank you for your entry.
    Fire


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    February 26, 2008

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    Stunning

    Wow you really have written an amazing poem
    Mind blowing are your words, truly amazing
    Good luck in the contest and keep penning these creations
    Julie x


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    February 26, 2008

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    Stunning work indeed, written here. Wonderful writing here for my dear lil sis, She sure will be pleased with this one. Well done indeed.

    All the best
    Wayne Leon


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 26, 2008

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    wow your poetry is always stunning and amazing its so poetically written and just wow a beautiful and dark dedicaiton well done twinny


  • luna-midnight gold member
    February 26, 2008

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    OMG! *sniffels* it's so pretty, it makes me want to cry =P lol
    its such a beautiful poem, wow! good luck in the contest...and awww thanks sooo much.
    *hugs tightly*
    tehe i believe im stunned!
    ^_^
    stephanie =)

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