If love was a dew drop, you’d be a downpour.
I'd stand there with my arms up, just wanting more.
Because you’re everything I need and all I could ask for.
Because love’s that little feeling that goes down to my core.
Author notes
Writen 2/26/08
In a list
A contest entry
- 4 Lines With The Pretext Of Love by Vernal Bloom.
450 points, ended March 11, 2008, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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so sweet in so short a poem... that first line took me by storm! beautiful imagery, and it's very easy to relate to!
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aww this is so cute...if this was written about me i'd be so touched...i especially love the line about standing there with your arms up just wanting more..it provoked really strong and warm imagery for me and made me feel that love...great work
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aww thats sweet must be a special sumone
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awwwwwwwww how cute
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very nice...short but to the point
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Ah ah this was great! I enjoyed each line and am happy to see this entry, today! Soft and gentle!
Thank you for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest
~Massy~
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I'm glad you've enjoyed it and thank you for the Bronze! great contest!
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