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The Land of Odd

Those feelings I get,
they bring me down,
can't take it anymore,
don't wanna be around.

I need an escape,
a need to release,
let go of everything,
make it all freeze.

i'm sick of myself,
and every single lie,
i need to change,
i want to die.

forever i'm gonna fight,
i'll make myself stop,
i'm going to change,
like it or not.

i'll run away forever,
that place i know,
the Land of Odd,
it's where i'll go.

i'll be with him,
walking hand in hand,
fighting against the world,
we'll escape to this land.

maybe i'll be better,
i don't really know,
its so hard to change,
but i can only hope.

break me down again,
i'll fight you again,
fighting against the world,
i won't be like i been.

no more being depressed,
no more childish games,
i really need to change,
i put myself to shame.

run away from it all,
to that place where everything fits,
a place where everyone belongs,
the Land of Odd

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  • SarahEatsAirplane
    April 25, 2008

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    the title kind of reminds me of dr. seuss..
    but i like how you're admitting to whatever you've done, and saying you'll be "better". this is pretty hopeful, i like it.