Death ending your life someday
Dementia......your crazy for life
Distort............twisting sadism
Discomfort.........shifting uneasily
Denied............lost and forgotten
Diminishing.......dust in a memory
Distinguish the difference now
Inside is where your heart begins to bleed
............Intention: suicide............
............Inner beauty: lost............
............Irate: distant: gone............
............Inevitably : : alone............
............Independence : none............
Incoherently you become the failure of all
Everything becomes what it never should be
Entwining life
Endless blood
Entertainment beyond the masses
Encrypted lies
Ego - maniacs
Excellence in nothing except ending yourself
Author notes
attempt...
A contest entry
- Something Different by One Angry Monkey.
600 points, ended March 13, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thanks for the entry and for the attempt at relinquishing the forms that we know so well. Can you give me some insight into it, i'm interested as to what you were trying to convey with the format.
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well its the whole wanting to get life over with, and so the format spells out die if you look at it from a slight distance. it's the idea of just ending the pain and getting on to what might matter
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this is very good
i like the death(suicide)theme to it
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thanks a TON
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