Kissed your eyes
layed you down to rest
you sleep eternally
with the angel of death
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I entered this into poetry.com, maybe with luck I'll win something.
02/26/08
Say What You Want, If it's hurtful u'll be ignored
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kissed the eyes, lay-ed to rest, eternally with angel of death...now that is a scary thought...smiles...I do love the way your mind works
Niaish my little one for sharing with me
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Thanks grandmother!
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wow, this is so strong.... great job, and good luck!
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This was really good, but if you want poetry.com to take you seriously, I'd change 2 to two.
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Thanks, I did write it out 2 as to on poetry.com, but I rushed it here.
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Oh, this is sad. Well written but so so sad. I think it would be more powerful if you changed your 2 to two...but that is just my humble opinion. great job.
Kelli
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Ya thanks 4 pointing that out, I need 2 slow down more often lol
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