*beat, beat, beat, beat*
Your love rejuvenates the life in me
Your passion pumps the blood through my veins
Your breath is the oxygen in my system
*beat, beat, beat*
Fall apart as I whisper in your ear
Fall below as your conscience revives
Fall, slip, grip the edges as you escape
*beat, beat*
Leave the door wide open on your way
Leave my heart bleeding, beating on the floor
Leave behind agony and sorrow
*beat*
Finalize your goodbye before you go
Finalize my death with her
Finalize insanity seeping through your mind
*...*
You left with her, it killed me
You broke my heart, it killed me
You, my love, killed me.
*Why'd you have to go, and leave my heart a bloody mess; empty, cold, and dead?*
Author notes
For some reason, I keep thinking the things I write don't go right with the contests... but I hope this works. Laterzzz
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~Sammerz~
A contest entry
- My Broken Heart Lies Bleeding by SchizoChic.
600 points, ended February 29, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This poems is so much like my love life because she broke my heart
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good job. best of luck.


