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Haiku

Blue sky scattered and
broken by the pulsing sun-
flock of butterflies

Author notes

"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

A contest entry

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    March 21, 2008

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    Thank you so much for your Haiku I appreciate your entry... All counts are good, good form,and authors notes, thank you..best wishes, Ken IBT

  • Linny9
    March 6, 2008

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    This is a lovely haiku. Haiku starts with the nature scene, and I like that about the haiku writing.


  • Candy6
    March 2, 2008
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    lovely

    lovely haiku.


  • Kelli Marie
    February 26, 2008

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    I like this. I think you did a great job with your entry. A well written haiku. I wish you luck in the contest.
    Kelli