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Warm

Walking the way,
enjoying the colour.
The woods fill me,
with joy and warmth.

A new day has begun,
with it perhaps life anew.
Ponder on the deeper meaning,
of why, when and where.

A final answer still eludes me,
yet...I am content.

A contest entry

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  • Yemassee gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    Great wisdom. So many people on this website aren't content, and it's their only life and their only chance to be happy. Your poem resonates with that simple happiness of daily living.


  • g-tonttu
    February 27, 2008
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    Thank you all for your comments and best of luck wishes.
    I am truly glad that you enjoyed my poem...and once again a BIG thanks to Reptile Lady for the HM.
    G


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    February 26, 2008

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    Congratulations

    I am sorry I forgot to add that the HM are in no fixed order... and delighted to award you with and HM
    Julie

  • Reptile Lady gold member
    February 26, 2008
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    Lovely

    This image you have painted with your words are wonderful. A place to escape, to absorb, and as you said you are content
    Thank you for your entry and wish you well in my contest
    Julie


  • MysticalRayne
    February 26, 2008

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    Very nice write. Nature always makes you questions a deeper meaning in life. Best of luck in the contest


  • creationsfromheart
    February 26, 2008
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    very nice write good luck in the contest.


  • righteousme
    February 26, 2008

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    i love the end where you say "a final answer eludes me". how many of us can relate to that... and the last line "yet... i am content" is exactly how i feel... thanks for posting... good luck

    • g-tonttu
      February 26, 2008
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      Thank you for your comment,
      I think it is important for each and one
      to be content at times and not to always search the answers.
      They will come with time...

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