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Sultry

The day so hot and humid.
She was just the same.
But we did not let that stop us
Enjoying our special game.

Author notes

The prompt here was the single word sultry and a limit of 30 words. I've 7 left
Miriam webster's dictionary defines sultry simply as, 'hot and humid'.

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  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    February 29

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    I'd think being hot and humid would indeed be an advantage to that special game...well, I guess that depends on what the special game is.

    We make certain exceptions when passion comes into play. Nicely done.


    • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
      February 29
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      I'm not sure if it would be an 'advantage', I'd think it would be more of a consequence of the game you are probably thinking of .
      Thanks for taking the time to comment. It's much appreciated.
      Jim

  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 28

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    Well done...the flow is wonderful and it sure is sultry...I thought you were playing hide and seek myself, but that is just me...lol
    Okay back to the write...it is a wonderful write for the prompt and says so much in it's brevity...
    mystic


    • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
      February 29
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      Thanks for those kind words. I am glad you liked it. As for your words "hide and seek myself" it depends on the punctuation. Is it "seek myself" a lonely game How is the myself to be interpreted?
      English is a lovely language with all the possible interpretations.
      Jim

  • Hannahs Mom
    February 28

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    Smokin' Write,Jim!

    Well,now...this is a side of you I've never seen.
    Love the background also,by the way.

  • nothinghere silver member
    February 27

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    Well this is certainly hot and humid... nicely done

    Thanks for taking the time to enter this contest, wishing you the best of luck

    Karen

  • Wandika gold member
    February 26
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    Hop Scotch?

    You did well.
    How nice it would be for a hot and humid day. Too cold this winter.

    Jim

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