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Disneyland Tours

Disneyland Tours

Lines of Japanese tourists
all spawned together
Move like schools of tropical fish
Flash colorful sameness
One id stuck l
No one venturing outside
That invisible tank
float along
fantasyland
tide of spreading oriental yens.

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  • g-tonttu
    February 26, 2008

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    Ah yes,
    the tourists.
    Tis' true that they are like fish...or perhaps sheep.
    Great poem. Keep up the good work.
    G

    • Zyskandar A Jaimot
      February 26, 2008
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      much thanks for the read/comments yes JAPANESE TOURISTS a spreading tide of oriental yens! regards zaj