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...and he painted creation
in all her glory;

velvet softness
of midnight skies,
peach coloured hues
of Spring's allure,
draped in virtue's
pristine delicacy

...and he painted
with the eyes
of a yearning lover,
as her curves
seduced his brush
into drops of temptation.

She moved
in such unfeigned innocence
that his palette needed
but one ripe colour
as he portrayed his adoration.

The canvas of his desire
would haunt his soul
until eternity.

Author notes

"and I painted"


Picture credit: Body & Soul Artist/link - unknown


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  • HeavenonEarth
    February 29, 2008

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    Now this is a elegant piece just shimmering from the strokes of the artist. An exquisite beauty...
    Thank you so much for entering my contest and all the best to you
    Much Love & Many Blessings~
    ~Joy


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    February 26, 2008

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    How beautifully creative and tender. Your words simply slid effortlessly to the image and wrapped me up in wonderful feelings.

    A stunner. Well done. ~Pamela


  • Zommorroda
    February 26, 2008

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    Great

    I love everything about this poem, the words, the flow, the feeling, the message and the picture. Great job.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 26, 2008

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    wow gran just wow this is so amazing and in my words one of your best. your words are inspirational and powerful.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    February 26, 2008

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    Wow this is seriously by far one of your best... I am standing in applause... or sitting... but applauding all the same... gently beautiful, softly sensual and compeltely breathtaking! Going in my bookmarks... goodluck in this contest hun

    Karen

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