Trophies displayed behind counters
Counting moments inside a glass vase
Cases gathering cluttered memories stored
Stories for dusting over eager ears to come
Spilled out over a period of stillness
When undressed pride removed it at will
Until momentum lost her move to a passing bird
I first heard a clear voice for the years to come
26-02-08
^^ as they say, one step back for many more forward........
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sometimes we have to get the broom out and give the mind a good old clean, we keep the good memories and hopefully get rid of the bad - follow the bird
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interesting work. it's a nice blend of rhyming and repetativeness in a way i havn't seen before. Thanks for the entry
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It's actually similar to the way poems are written in Thai... but I applied the method in English here Thanx 4 the contest and comment!
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