Eyes sparked with desire; ran in veins like liquid fire
Stared with a surprising thought; a beautiful portray of sunset she brought
Approached with notions of the sinful seven; yet held her head high in heaven
Silky springs were drop from the head; vitality and sexuality was spread
As the heart drums out reaching the ears; melodies of seduction it did release
Music transported the soul’s emotions; from sadness & pain to exultation
Dissolved in words shared lipped; tumult the heart after being gripped
Words of love smoked the atmosphere; poured like warm honey into the ear
Perfume of the flesh by nose was smelled; yet the taste in the palate held
Sled the tongue from neck to shoulder low; anxiety & lust started to flow
Ultimate taste sensations of the skin; intimate secretions the mouths win
Sweet juices that squirt and steam; a rough nutty loaf nourished with cream
Movements started with arms & hands; express through the snake dance
Gentle shakes on shoulders took place; lips constantly massaged the face
Palms on breast welcome and threat; triumph and defeat war in the bed
Bosom friends’ potent antidote to stress; furiously sucked & gently caressed
The serpent of energy down it slide; slumbered coiled round a lingam of light
A safe place where mystery of life start; fused with the phallus to compose art
Hidden treasures between thighs were found; towers to circular abyss were pound
After heat the phallus throws it; a massive ejaculation formed perfumed fluid
Kamasutra the muse of pleasure; the way to indulge our hidden treasures
Art of the flesh or map of seduction; lustful desires and world of corruption
Silent tongues in dimness were measured; to find the flesh and give it pleasure
The idea was found in a very weird way; to bloom in life an everlasting SUNDAY.
1:26 am
26-02-08
A contest entry
- Please excite me. by Midnight-x-Rose.
450 points, ended March 12, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
KAMASUTRA & SUNDAYS....
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Amazing
Wow.
Your use of words, the right use of words, mixed in with the touch of an erotic tone just makes this poem... fantastic.
It made me shudder, aha, well done!
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Yeah does actually sound like the Kamasutra. Very nicely written here, beautiful and yet... erotic. Nicely done.
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You capture the reader in the first two lines, and the rest is pure erotic bliss. Your use of metaphors are vivid, give a sizzling sensual picture of passionate love....I must say this read is amazingly beautiful and dynamic. Just keep writing of love, romance, and erotica..you are excellent................
Novy
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Very erotic and tightly written...actually, this is one of the best I've read in a long while. It is not easy to write something sensual, truly sensual, without coming off too silly...you, my new friend, have my nod of approval. Love, Lane
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This time i'm keeping comments to myself, as i fear words won't express what i have to express. D
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diana, what good is a comment if you don't share it?
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You are definitely right abusalim, yet I dont see you sharing your comment...
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