Amazingly blasphemous creepers,
Deceitful errant fools!
Get!
Hades incapacitates jocular keepers,
Lament masticated neural pools...
Quick!
Reiterate spoken treachery,
Undo vile wizardry...
Xenophobic?
Yes!
Zounds...
A contest entry
- Crazy psycho spasmatic convolsions!!!!!!! by scum of the earth.
300 points, ended February 27, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
Wow, this is such an unusual write, I really enjoyed this, well done. And congratulations on winning the gold trophy, much deserved.
-
Oh. this is beautifully Bizarre! I love this... great form, and word usage!!!
-
A good piece, I was half way through before I realised the style. Not easy to do but you've done a superb job. Good luck
-
I can see where
you added the extra part to your
title. Or no one would have ever known.
I thought of this poem as exciting
with lots of swirling emotions from
the twelve year old.
Reiterate spoken treachery,
Undo vile wizardry.
This was my favorite part,
I remember when I was younger I
was into stuff like this but
at the same time I don't
think I was psycho. Hahah.
Good luck!
-
This is so very scary and full of anger. The 12 year old must be infested with some severe mental issues.
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
