Comment:
Your poem was so relaxing, I read it just once and it brought to me a soothing feeling around me. The grammar, as well as the rhymes, are congruently shaped and developed. The effort you put there is greatly appreciated as nothing seems to be put around randomly.
Behind the screen:
Jesus, this poem was boring as hell, I guess I'll read it again for sleeping, maybe it can deal with my insomniac issues. This guy swears he has talent for writing like Shakespeare with such oh-so-perfect rhymes, styled with a rich vocabulary which makes me think about how many dictionaries this guy had to read, and don't forget the grammar looks so nice it makes this look like an essay rather than a poem.
Author notes
2. Oh , i really wish i could tell you what i'm thinking, comment - forget about being diplomatic
A contest entry
- That's a comment? Contest by galfalfa.
525 points, ended March 3, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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haha..i dont think ive ever written one bad comment! :]
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this is exactly how i feel sometimes after reading a poem, and sometimes after writing one
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How many many times have I sought and sought to find SOMTHING nice to say, some new way to say it ...
I've come across some here who seem to think commenting itself is some sort of art or poetry. Feeding you full of fluff and ego over a piece of writing you knew damn well was complete crap and you only posted for lack of anything else to write/post or some little fantasmicl hope of breaking the "block" with.
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God...yes...I try to always be nice...at least to leave a comment...but sometimes I hit my head on the desk asking myself, "Why!?"
Síochán leat
~Mairéad~
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this has some important ideas in it : to me, a poem that reeks of dictionaries, tends to reek of forgetting words which tends to reek .... unless the poet can use words that he or she knows, that is, of course, naturally, obvious. yes?
.... this is so good!!!
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LOL, I like the behind the scenes idea...
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LOL, this poem was so boring i fell asleep, hitting my head on the keyboard, got a Q in the eye ...you will be hearing from my lawyer
Hey thanks for the laugh, loved your example
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eheh this is a great piece and I can actually imagine you thinking that now lol. ill be looking at your comments more now
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... if I don't comment on [Most of] your poetry is because of the reason we know, not because I'm hiding something.
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lmfaoooo I am glad to know I'm not the only one that thinks that
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Hehe a great piece, I wonder how often it actually happens....best of luck in the contest
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