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Closer and Closer

Running through the trees,
feet pounding on the ground,
twigs snapping under foot,
branches scratching her face.

She has to get away,
get as far away as possible.

Running through the trees,
blood soaking her clothes,
tears streaming down her face,
struggling to catch her breath.

She can hear them coming,
Coming closer and closer to her.

Runing through the trees,
glancing back behind her,
praying this is a nightmare,
stumbling, legs giving way.

She can feel them on her,
feel them biting and tearing.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Unearthed-Angel
    February 26, 2008

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    wow Kate O.O
    I like imagined it in my head as i was reading lol
    very good
    Luv Tam xxx