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A Beauty Awakes


After a long night of singing and dancing
with her friends the night before,
finally she had to wake up.
Amazingly her skin still soft as fresh rose petals
she uncoiled from her beauty sleep,
stretched her strong muscles and let the portal ajar,
and got ready for the busy day ahead.

Her perfectly sculptered body,
a true resemblance o' a healthy eater,
lean and trim without
excessive flabs of fat in her figure.

The blanket which tenderly embraced
her the night before,
muttered words with sadness embeded on them
as she was to leave it in lonesome bore.
Time had come for her to go
and prepare for work.
A beautiful sight I wish I could see

A contest entry

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  • HeavenonEarth
    February 29, 2008

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    A beauty did wake indeed..Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts & what the picture did inspire for you in this penning. Thank you for entering my contest and all the best to you
    ~Joy