In feminine solitudes sensual demure
slipping from her enshrouding wraps cacoon
enticing motions of lingering allure
singing seductions fire's classical tune.
Painters figure to imaginations paint
rendering brush strokes fluid lines
inveigled canvas ascending renditions
hard transitional poses hungry designs.
Fingers lightly tracing bodies contours
tender kisses tasting lips like wine
sweeter sips and caressing tours
Renoir passions painted limbs entwine.
Dimming lights strike candle wick whores
flickering heats melting wax puddled pools
lubrication's beading fluids exuding pores
slipping lust into penetrating sweltering jewels.
Temperatures rising inhibitions lost
refrain gives way to anxious need
desperation devouring patience frost
giving pumping boilers fires their feed.
The scent of driving liquids boiling heat
slapping me back into canvas reality
where cigarette burned my fingers meat
holding painters colored palette mentality.
Thinking thoughts, if she only knew
Blushing the colors texture and hues
(unaware of her pondering hidden roses
nudity and her Ben Wa inspired poses)
Author notes
"and I painted"
Photo prompt
30 lines or less
A contest entry
- I'm waiting- 20 poets/30 lines or less by HeavenonEarth.
725 points, ended February 29, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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too funny.. definitely a comical expression of poetry. Thank you for the chuckle and entering my contest. All the best to you
Much Love and Many Blessings~
~Joy
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beautiful, senual piece of art, I loved it
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So Fun
What a beautiful piece of art you painted here. I really enjoyed this one. It becomes very heated but so sensually soft too. I loved the picture you wrote this for, it is beautiful just like your poem. Hey good luck in the contest!
Excellent Write
Kelle Marie
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Very caressing are these sensual thoughts given
voice. Clearly attuned to the artwork prompt...
you give the reader pause within each line.
Blue
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I like this word: inveigled Nice nice nice.
You have blended some beautiful words and wrapped them in a shower of sensual delight. A lovely lovely piece for this contest. My hat's off to you on this one. Excellent. ~Pamela
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Holy heck in a handbag, this is fantastic, such a sensual take on the beauty of this prompt, only you can paint a picture such as this without a canvas... truly captivating....goodluck in the contest
Karen
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