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Colored

Missing image

The colors have spilled from what I see
Blues and purples I found in your heart
Catch the sky as a dark reflection
But notice the clouds still take your part

Once abandoned by the fallen leaves
She now smiles bright into the glow
Color spread, the ever-setting sun
When you realize the white is snow

One more step toward the horizon
Accepting both the rose and the thorn

A sky stretching tree grows upward slowly
A flowered vine climbs to the new morn

 

She is the elf queen who created it all
A bright-eyed glance, a blooming flower

The goddess of nature, of fluttering light
A long lasting feeling made of color

Author notes

Option A: picture inspired.
art credit: "Can you see the magic by MissMagical on DeviantArt"

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  • squirrelgirl
    April 5, 2008

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    Sorry you didn't place,
    though your look on this picture is
    colorful, just like the picture itself.
    Great write!
    May your pencil never break!
    ~squirrel~


  • RainbowGirl257
    February 28, 2008

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    the first stanza is the one that really stays in my mind. i love how you have written about the prompt! well done. good luck and thanks for entering my contest!