Heart soaring with desire
Feeding the flame just like a fire
With your true love you will go on
Until your time on earth has gone
A contest entry
- 4 Lines With The Pretext Of Love by Vernal Bloom.
450 points, ended March 11, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a really good poem. It makes me want to cry. Tear. Tear. literally.
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This was a very sweet write!! soft and full of emotion.. And the image that you created here was a nice soft one.. well done.. I really enjoyed reading this..
Angel
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very pretty
i think even if it is short it is very deep u have a way with words -
So adorable!! Also,the rhyming is unforced and flows beautifully...
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Beautifully written. love this poem. I can relate it to my current relationship. Short and sweet.
great write!
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This was such a touching piece.. I like how the words flow together..Great write.
Peace to you, J.
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enjoyed this write the way it shines within its sweet emotions...thanks
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Lovely, short piece.
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wonderful! i "love" how you did this!
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Hah very injoyable love, the last two lines were just excellent! And you penned a great meaning in just 4 lines. Great, Poet.
I thank you kindly for sharing this with us and wish you luck in the contest
~Massy~
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WONDERFULLY SWEET
Yes my Brother I would think it is
otc your words speak to the heart not just the mind...heart...fire of love...lasting forever sighs...niaish so much for sharing with me and just being you
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nice good luck
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