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Is This Love!

Heart soaring with desire
Feeding the flame just like a fire

With your true love you will go on

Until your time on earth has gone

A contest entry

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  • This is a really good poem. It makes me want to cry. Tear. Tear. literally.

  • This was a very sweet write!! soft and full of emotion.. And the image that you created here was a nice soft one.. well done.. I really enjoyed reading this..
    Angel

  • lovinsapphire
    April 23
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    very pretty

    i think even if it is short it is very deep u have a way with words
  • So adorable!! Also,the rhyming is unforced and flows beautifully...

  • Killerzombies
    March 30

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    Beautifully written. love this poem. I can relate it to my current relationship. Short and sweet. great write!

  • Angelflower Greeters member
    March 16
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    This was such a touching piece.. I like how the words flow together..Great write.
    Peace to you, J.


  • Grateful
    March 11
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    enjoyed this write the way it shines within its sweet emotions...thanks
  • celadia
    March 7
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    Lovely, short piece.

  • wonderful! i "love" how you did this!

  • Vernal Bloom
    March 1

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    Hah very injoyable love, the last two lines were just excellent! And you penned a great meaning in just 4 lines. Great, Poet.

    I thank you kindly for sharing this with us and wish you luck in the contest

    ~Massy~


  • TwilightPanther gold member
    February 26

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    WONDERFULLY SWEET

    Yes my Brother I would think it isotc  your words speak to the heart not just the mind...heart...fire of love...lasting forever sighs...niaish so much for sharing with me and just being you


  • creationsfromheart silver member
    February 26
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    nice good luck

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