Wakening from my worst nightmare,
of darkened paradoxical illusions
what I witness upon my eyelashes
is only pain and disappointment
I'm alone just only me no one else
Author notes
-about loneliness
A contest entry
- Quickie. by warrior-eagle.
300 points, ended February 28, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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First of all you must forget the past and move ahead with your great future.
Secondly this is a great poem, sad but having emotion inside.. -
Keep feeling great. I would be happy, if you could spare some time to stamp your impressions on my poems.
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I am pretty sure that this springs happiness to any poet as it Summerises the essence of life that resembles the horrifying season of winter, dear Autumn poetess. Emotional outbreak.
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short n meaning ful i guesss
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It made me imagine what you were trying to say. The second line has great volume, I enjoyed this one alot.
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alone
yes, we all feel this way sometimes.
Sometimes I wonder why people can't understand me, but then I realize that I don't really understand myself either, so I try to forgive them.
Thanks for sharing your pain.
It's a bit generic so I can't see what you are really refering to, but I can see from your words that it is hurting you. I hope you recover soon.
Have a good day,
BJ.
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nice appraoch on the prompt.. fix the typo "no one"
i like your title the degree is complete.. best of luck
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